Don't focus on the music, but the lyrics
This was actually really enjoyable to listen to, especially J-kellz part. J, you've got an amzing talent for rhythm in your words. i don't know what it is, but we're talking like grammy winning shit here dude. keep it up.
Vinny B, you've got a talent for writing lyrics. it's a very imaginative style. unfortunately you lack the ability to rap. it's nothing personal or anything, you just don't have a voice for it. it sounds completely and utterly wannabe like. however, Rome wasn't built in a day and i know i see some potential in there. have a listen to J's lyrics and notice how he can slide his words with the beat. that takes a lot of practice though. but i know you're up to it.
9 stars guys for creativity and rhythm. keep it up.